Rough Cut 2

From this I gained more audience feedback to improve my trailer for the final cut

• Intercutting the shots of the axe throughout the party scene and intercutting shots of the killer walking towards the camera throughout the trailer would give a daunting sense of him moving closer to his victims.
• The fade shots on the house were all inconsistent, some with fades and some without, i changed this to all the same fade.
• Add dialouge to show the teenagers are entering the hospital eg "lets go there"
• Change the "what happens when the storys you hear about" to something shorter with less words.
• Add a production company logo.
• Change the shot of the two teenagers in black and white to colour, as this adds confusion to wheather it is in the past or not.
• Incorparate more shot variation.
• Move all shots of the party to before the shots of the sign to show clearly the shift from the party to the hospital.